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Post by Blueninja_41 Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:45 am

TLOAE,
A new Beginning,
C2,
Life After Blue...

A pool of green blood had slowly formed under the bed, before slowly sinking into the barren landscape.
"The spellcaster's spirit is slowly dying away in you, and me, brother." Spa said to the heavens softly. "You now have found eternal happieness, brother..." Spa weeped. "Your soul still burns brightly in the darkness of death... And your spirits is still beside us all, watching over us... And guiding us." Spa finished. She rode her head and lifted her hands towards the sky. A bolt of fire shot from her hands, creating a hole in the clouds. A voice boomed out...
"Spatheleaf... Elsa... Draden... Fang. Your sorrow is ringing out to us and the death of the one you call 'Blue' has deeply sorrowed the spirits of the Pardraene Desert. Your comrade is with us and is watching over all of you. You are blessed by the presence of such good Casters, we are returning the True saviour of the Pardraene Desert and The planet of Aeonis to you, in hope of a better life of all that he seeks."

Three bolts of ice shot down from the clouds, startling everyone. The ice shattered and formed a triangle of ice, which glowed emerald green. A slight figure appeared and it walked round the camp, showing no emotions at all, untill Spa ran up and rugby tackled him. "BLUEEEEEEEE!" everyone yelled as they rushed to greet him.

TLoAE,
A new Beginning,
C3,
Where to now?
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Post by Elsa Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:56 am

Heehee, you had me going there, when I started reading what Spa was shouting to the heavens I was beginning to think he was dead. I thought he would have thought he would somehow survive and come back before it went that far. Well done, excellent
I look forward to more Very Happy
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Post by Blueninja_41 Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:02 am

Im surprised thst i wrote it like that too... Im crazy...
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Post by Elsa Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:10 am

That was a really good way of writing something, I've written so much in my own stories where characters have been seemingly dead but only once or twice had it where a God or some other powerful entity has actually resurrected the dead ranger because they've already left their own body
Long story and explanation how I do stuff in my stories really
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