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Post by Blueninja_41 Thu May 12, 2011 3:54 am

The Legends of Aeonis,
A new Beginning,
Chapter 1,
Blue's Destiny.


The group had set camp after the debate about the Evil Spirits. Blue had been made a bed out of anything they could find out in the open desert.
After the camp had been set and the group had a rest, Spa and Elsa tended to the groups wounds from the last day.

Spa, Elsa, Draden and Fang sat in the camp, taking in how all their lives had changed over the past twenty-Four hours. Blue lay in the middle of the group, on his bed, groaning every 2 minutes. The campfire blazed and crackled and it sent sparks shooting out around it.

The Evil spirit was about to strike again, but as it did, Spa, the victim, moved to Blue.
"How are you doing... Brother?" spa whispered to Blue.
Blue Opened his mouth to speak, but the words didn't come out. His breathing became pants for air and his forehead broke sweat.
"He's going into shock!" Yelled Spa

Through all the commotion, the Evil Spirit took it's chance to strike.
Spa picked up her sword and plunged it through blue's chest.
Blue screamed out in pain as the sword impacted his spinal chord and it snapped his backbone like a twig. Draden rushed at Spa and took her down, using immense strength. Spa coughed up the same ball of Pheglm and got up, not realising what happened.
Blue screamed in pain again, as he twitched, his body went into a spasm.
Spa realised what happened and bent over Blue.

"I think Spa needs a moment alone" Elsa whispered to the others.

Spa touched blue's forehead. Almost Dead.
"So this was his destiny", Spa thought outloud.
She kissed him on the lips and said a prayer in a language that wasn't understandable.
She kissed blue again and said "Goodnight... Brother."

One by one, Blue's organ systems ground to a halt and he lay there.
Spa broke into tears, singing a final hymn. She touched Blue on each cheek and his body slowly faded away.


A new beginning,
C2,
Life without Blue.

Coming soon...
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Post by Elsa Thu May 12, 2011 8:02 am

Lolz, how is Blue going to come back from that, I can't wait to see how Blue manages to survive all this, poor Blue he's a glutton for punishment Very Happy
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Post by Blueninja_41 Thu May 12, 2011 8:23 am

Maybe he won't come back!!! And then who will you pray to???? Hmmmm???
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Post by Elsa Thu May 12, 2011 8:25 am

Nah, he's got to come back, he's your lead character, I do this sort of stuff all the time in my stories Smile
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Post by Blueninja_41 Thu May 12, 2011 8:27 am

Maybe he won't com back for a while, hmm? Then will you pray to the fallen hero that has risen again?
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Post by Elsa Thu May 12, 2011 8:28 am

Well I'm sure you have a great trick up your sleeve, I look forward to seeeing how it progresses Very Happy
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Post by Blueninja_41 Thu May 12, 2011 8:29 am

Hmm... I can't have it up my sleeve, i'm wearing no top now xD muahahaha
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