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Post by Blueninja_41 Thu May 05, 2011 6:22 pm

Legends of aeonis.

Cities in ruins,
Chapter 1,
Judgement day.

The cobbled streets in the little town of Banjuu were silent, apart from the howling wind. There were houses along the streets of Banjuu, most with thatched rooves, but some with tiles. Banjuu was a nest of fear, as many asteroids threatened to pulverise the landscape.
At midday, the sky shone a dark red, and a black shape appeared in the sky. Suddenly, a door burst open and a character in blue and black robes, armed with a sword raced out. Blue looked into the sky as the black shape suddenly burst into flames. At that moment, a boom startled all the neighbours and they rushed out into the street.
The black shape impacted some 5 kilometres away from the village, but the shockwave ripped through Banjuu and tore houses away. People went flying and blue struggled to stand his ground, though he was much stronger than average humans.
The shockwave finally relented and Blue first realised the impact of the meteorite. Dead bodies were strewn everywhere, and houses lay in ruins. The town of Banjuu had been destroyed.
One human lay on the ground, shaking uncontrollably. Blue realised who it was straight away. That was Draden, he was Blue's best friend and he was not going to die while Blue was still there. Blue needed help, but where from?

To be continued...


Cities in ruins,
Chapter two
Revival

Draden needed help, and fast! Blue couldn't think of anything that he could do, but he new someone who could.
Spa! Blue needed to find her, but where? Spa's house was on the other side of Banjuu, but the whole town was destroyed, and Spa could be anywhere.

Mist descended on the small town and Blue noticed a sillhouette through the fog. Blue rushed towards the shape and called out,
"Spa, is that you?"
"no, Spa is in my basement, I came to look for help."
"fang",Blue replied, "is that you? I need spa now, Draden is in trouble."
"I will get Draden, you get Spa." said Fang.

Blue arrived at fang's house. It was still mostly intact, apart from the windows and the right side wall. Blue kicked down the front door and jumped down the basement stairs.
In the corner, huddled in fear, was Spa.
"Blue?" said Spa, "is that you? Is Fang ok?"
"Fang is fine, but i need you to help, Draden is in danger and only you can heal him!"
"I'll help, for you, Draden and for fang!"

Blue and Spa had arrived at Draden, Fang was bending over him.
"Don't worry, Draden, I'm here" Announced Spa.

Spa put both her hands on Draden's chest and said some words in an unusual language.
"Draden should be healthy in about fifteen minutes." said Spa
"Good, we need to move!"

To be continued...

Cities in ruins,
Chapter three,
The hunt.


Draden soon woke, to find that his, and many other's, hometown was destroyed. Draden felt the presence of a person, and at that moment, Spa looked over him.
"how are you doing?" Said Spa
Draden mumbled a few words, and tried to lift his head. A searing pain shot through his head, and all the way down to his backbone.
"oh no you don't" said Spa.
"Not yet, can you move. You just stay right there untill i say."

Blue was looking around every body on the ground, looking for any more survivors. He spotted shapes, mostly humanoid, on the horizon.
Blue rushed over to Fang and Spa.
"How is he, Spa?" queried Blue.
"He could be better. He also could be worse. He will be fine in 3 minutes." replied Spa
"Good, they are here."

The night dawned upon the small village, Draden was up, and everyone was ready to defend.
The shapes grew and soon you could make out features. The oldest, about 38 had a distinct scar on his right eye. The youngest had a tatoo of a snake on his neck and wore a red bandanna.

The people drew guns, some just pistols, but one, scarface, had a machine gun.

Fang suddenly broke cover and ran at the humans. They all loaded their weapons at once, ready for a firefight. Fang kicked out dust and ran into the group. He landed a punch on one, he felt a crack as the man's ribcage shattered. Blue drew a sword and charged. While dodging bullets. Draden strolled away, looking for the closest field.

The fight lasted 5 minutes and all but two of the hunters were dead, or on the ground, wounded.
Blue was propped up against a wall as scarface came round the corner. He pointed a gun at Blue and pulled the trigger.
Time slowed for blue, but out of nowhere, a knife flew past and pinned the bullet to a nearby wall.
"I am Elsa," the mistery life-saver said.
"and i do not approve of good people being mindlessly attacked, so scamper now!" encouraged Elsa.
"I will catch you, and when i do, no one will be able to stop me!" yelled scarface.
Red bandanna followed scarface away.

"thankyou, Elsa! How would you like to travel with me and my comrades?" said Blue.
"No problem, i'd love to. But we'd better move now! We never know what that asteroid could contain!" pointed out Elsa.


The end.
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