The line of Fire, P1 C1

The Line Of Fire,
P1, Brothers in Arms,
C1,
Standing Out.

"Forward March!" general Damzci yelled as the elite group, from the LBPA, turned their backs from the dead city.
"But sir, there are wounded citizens here, we can't leave them to die!" Commander TWK replied, as he stood back from the line.
"We can and we will..." general Damzci yelled at the Commander.

General Damzci raised his pistol to Commander TWK's head.
"No!" Yelled a voice from the line. "I will not stand for this either, lives could be saved here and you are throwing away the chance to save innocent lives!" The private stepped forwards and raised a gun to the General.
"I suggest you surrender, or you are in deep trouble..." the Private said.

A gunshot cracked out, startling the birds in the trees and the civillians. One of the soldiers dropped to the floor, writhing in pain. The General took his chance, he spun round and shot out at TWK, the bullet ripping straight through his chest. The Private then rolled round and out behind General Damzci and pulled his pistol arm behind his back. The private heard TWK's voice in his head;
"Blueninja, kill the worthless bastard!"

Private Blueninja took the General's gun and raised it to damzci head.

The line of fire,
P1 C2,
Execution!
Coming soon...

I like it, very good, I do hope TWK is going to come back somehow that sounds very bad

I hope he does too:P